Moral Hazard wrote: ↑Mon Dec 09, 2019 12:45 pm
I started the article
Ronald E. Powaski (T-H-L) when I saw an Oxford University Press history by him in a Stockholm bookstore and I discovered that he was teaching at a high school.
It was recently
WP:PROD (T-H-L)ed, but thanks to the efforts of the wonderful dears,
Gerda Arendt (T-C-L) and
Carrite (T-C-L) / Randy, it is now a reliably sourced
WP:BLP (T-H-L) that likely satisfies
WP:Notability (academics) (T-H-L) (although it could be expanded using the reviews of his books, including those already cited, or more obituaries, which are difficult to access in Europe).
In its last citation, two errors (URL and page) should be updated as follows:
<ref name="Eden">{{cite journal
|title=The Entangling Alliance: The United States and European Security, 1950–1993. By Ronald E. Powaski. (Westport: Greenwood, 1994. xxii, 261 pp. $59.95, ISBN 0-313-27275-1.)
| last=Eden|first=Douglas
|journal=The Journal of American History |publisher=Oxford University Press|volume=82 |issue=2|date=September 1995|page=829
| url=
https://academic.oup.com/jah/article-abstract/82/2/829/712197|ref=harv}}</ref>
Presumably, the book-review could have a shortened title.
If I was allowed to legally edit, I would hop on and add a ton of stuff to this article. There's a lot that can be done to re-inforce notability.
Also if it was about a non-white male subject I would be more inclined. But it's not a hill I'm willing to die on.
My unasked for suggestions:
- Use typical section headings
see:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia ... e_elements
-- Biography is what the entire article is
-- Use:
--- Early life and education, Career, Works and publications
- Go to FamilySearch.org and see if they list his full name, including middle name
- List all of his books
-- Check to see if he has also written articles -- it's probable, and also further establishes notability
--- I think the Commentaries is an odd title, and they should be added to a H3 as Selected articles (and create a H3 for Books)
--- Search Worldcat.org -- it's fabulous and the viewport digitized items are much better than Google Books IMO (cleaner URL, nicer interface)
- FOR GOODNESS SAKE: Use horizontal citation formats and if possible, use the Cite template, which will automate things like books if you put in the ISBN numbers, DOIs, etc.). The more typical horizontal citation format makes the page easier for everyone to edit, as well. I get this is the old style way but it's just not typical
-- harv ref style is pure evil, IMO - so avoid those and cite inline
- Add Memberships and any honors or awards he's won (helps notability)
-- Pull from Prabook as a starting point
-- Award nomination / winning pages often point to other awards and usually have nice bits of biographical facts that can be used to find additional citations
- Use Prabook timeline to add a timeline of his career that is more broken out, then cite each addition
-- It's probably pulled from the guy's LinkedIn, so go and look for that and again reverse engineer that info
--- I did that for Katherine Maher's page and that's why she looks much more competent and solid than she is....
- Wikidata identifiers
-- bulk that shiz up from the bottom area of the VIAF page:
https://viaf.org/viaf/76414546/
--- History of VIAF ID:76414546 (19) <-- 19 is a lot and can help to establish notability
- Avoid using books by subject as citations (not sure why there's two dissertations, but I always like adding those to the page. But you need more tertiary sources
- Create a Commons category to collect all images and put the {{Commons category|[Name]}} in footer
- External links are weak -- I'd never use NNDB as it's borderline and who knows where it comes from
-- That said, it's a great source to reverse engineer possible places to look for more info on the guy
- He taught at many universities. See if he had a home page there that could be used as an external link. Colleges often keep those pages up
- Prabook is also a bit sketch, but again, reverse engineer the info
-- Yoinks there's a ton of personal info on there.... Living people info. Don't love this as far as BLP privacy.....
There's probably a lot more but this is just off the top of my head.
- Erika f/k/a BrillLyle aaaagh