Johnny Au wrote:Wikipedia has a major shortage of commas these days.
Commas are needed, since it makes reading aloud easier, as well as making it easier to digest what is written.
I believe in the Oxford comma, the greatest of all commas.
Commas, commas, and more commas galore!
However, I do remove commas, especially when exactly two items are listed.
Everyone makes fun of me and I do like to make fun of myself, the self-proclaimed king of commas.
I have problems with your first example – you have deployed two commas (ten cents thanks) just for rhetorical effect when they are quite unnecessary for meaning. Also if you had attended to meaning rather than sound you would have spotted a grammatical mistake and found a better way to demonstrate the meaning. It should be:
Commas are needed since they make reading aloud easier as well as making it easier to digest what is written.
Better still:
Commas are needed to facilitate both reading aloud and comprehension.
In archaic Greece, when writing was rare, everyone read aloud even in private and they didn’t have word spacing let alone commas. However Wikipedians might as well deploy rhetorical devices since much of their work is tendentious anyway.