DYK ...
... that aviator
Paul Pavelka (T-H-L) was killed after being thrown and stampeded by a horse?
Doesn't a stampede require multiple animals? How about "trampled"?
This is a "good article". Let's see.
He first served as a sailor on the USS Maryland (ACR-8) after joining the United States Army, before serving in World War I, serving under his regiment in the Second Battle of Champagne.
He was a sailor in the
Army? Nope, he was in the Navy.
He served
under his regiment? I assume that he served
in his regiment.
Also notice, that there is no explanation what regiment he fought in.
His father re-married, and after disliking his stepmother, Pavelka left his family in Madison.[6]
I know, "post hoc ergo propter hoc" is a fallacy. Still I assume that he left
because he disliked her.
Pavelka then operated at a mental health hospital in New York, before re-locating to the Western United States by train, working at a cattle and sheep ranch in Montana.[3][1][8]
He
operated at a mental health hospital? How about he
worked at a mental health hospital.
In 1910, Pavelka went to the Panama Canal Zone, before moving south and climbing the Andes as part of an expedition that killed his counterparts.[10]
His
counterparts???
Pavelka became a sailor at the age of twenty, circumnavigating by boat across the Pacific Ocean, stopping in London, and coming back to New York City before 1912.[3][9]
"Circum-" means "around", not "across". And how did he get to London by crossing the Pacific? Maybe he circumnavigated the Earth starting by crossing the Pacific? Also, I'm gonna go ahead and assume that he traveled on a
ship, not a boat.
He was once involved in a shipwreck, walking across South America.[11]
How do you get involved in a shipwreck while walking? Well, he walked across South America
after being involved in a ship wreck.
He then joined the United States Army, serving on the USS Maryland (ACR-8),[10] before being discharged and being transported to France in 1914 prior to the beginning of World War I.[10][12]
Again, Navy, not Army. And he was transported to France after being discharged?
Pavelka first entered as a member of the French 170th Infantry Regiment and the Army of Counani in October 1914, before joining the French Foreign Legion in France after the army disbanded.[10][13][14]
He entered
what as a member of the French 170th Infantry Regiment and the Army of Counani?
He took part in aviation school on December 10, 1915, joining the Lafayette Escadrille in August 1916 shortly after completing training.[13]
He took part in school? He didn't attend it?
On August 13, 1917, the engine in the Nieuport 16 plane Pavelka was flying caught fire. Pavelka crashed the plane into a swamp after attempting to keep the flames away from its cockpit.[14][6] He fled from the plane before it exploded and was shelled by German forces.[23] On October 30, 1916, while part of the Lafayette Escadrille, Pavelka was awarded the Croix de Guerre and cited for combating enemy forces by French general Maurice Sarrail,[3][19][24] and promoted to sergeant rank.[24]
Doesn't October 1916 come before August 1917?